Talk:Andrew Fisher
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[edit]I note that this page is linked to the Andrew Fisher who is listed at Casualties of the September 11, 2001 Terrorist Attacks: City of New York
Me thinks a disambig page is in order, although I am too sad from reading the cited page to do it now. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PaulinSaudi (talk • contribs) 16:35, 16 January 2004 (UTC)
Good Article Candidate Review
[edit]Hello,
I've now completed the good article review of this article and determined that it meets all of the Good Article Criteria, and as such I am passing it.
It is well written, well referenced, and you've clearly taken on board the comments in your peer review with regards to this. All images are used correctly in line with Wikipedia policy. The article is stable and written from a Neutral Point of View. I'm particularly happy that this article can be promoted - it's an important subject in Australia's history and the editors of this article should be proud.
Congratulations, and keep up the good work. Pursey Talk | Contribs 10:33, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks!! Timeshift 10:59, 17 September 2007 (UTC)yay
Recent edits
[edit]I made a series of edits on 8 October, which were reverted wholesale by Timeshift with some odd accusation of “pushing my agenda”. My edits included changing the spelling of "Labour" to "Labor" - I acknowledge I was wrong on that score. But that still leaves the other edits. I’d like to explain these here for general discussion, with a view to having them reinserted. All comments are welcome.
(a) I changed "When Watson retired in 1907" to "When Watson resigned in 1907", because he did in fact resign the leadership, mainly due to concerns over his wife's health.
(b) I changed "Governor General Dudley" to "the Governor-General Lord Dudley". We don’t refer to our G-G’s as "Governor General Smith", and even if we did, the title "Governor-General" requires a hyphen in Australian usage (see Governor-General of Australia).
(c) "Fisher carried out many reforms in defence, constitutional matters, finance, transport and communications, and social security, achieving the vast majority of his aims in his first government, including such specifics as establishing old-age and invalid pensions, a maternity allowance and workers compensation, issuing Australia's first paper currency, forming the Royal Australian Navy, the commencement of construction for the Trans-Australian Railway, founding Canberra and establishing the government-owned Commonwealth Bank".
- This is an exceedingly long and unwieldy sentence. I split it by "... in his first government. These included ...".
(d) "Fisher wanted additional Commonwealth power in additional areas."
- I changed the second “additional” to “some”.
(e) "Both were defeated with 61 percent voting 'No'. An additional six questions were asked at the 1913 referendum, on Trade and Commerce, Corporations, Industrial Matters, Trusts, Monopolies, and Railway Disputes. All six were defeated with around 51 percent voting 'No'".
- Both times the expression “per cent” was misspelled as “percent”, so I changed it.
(f) "At the 1910 election, Labor gained seventeen additional seats to hold a total of forty-three of the seventy-five House of Representative seats, and all eighteen Senate seats up for election to hold a total of twenty-two out of thirty-six seats, giving Fisher control of both Houses and formed Australia's first majority government, and the world's first Labour Party majority government."
- I changed this to: "At the 1910 election, Labor gained seventeen additional seats to hold a total of forty-three of the seventy-five House of Representative seats, and all eighteen Senate seats up for election to hold a total of twenty-two out of thirty-six seats. This gave Labour control of both Houses and enabled Fisher to form Australia's first majority government, and the world's first Labour Party majority government". My reasons were:
- the original sentence was far too long and unwieldy
- it wasn’t Fisher who gained control of both houses, but the Labour Party government that he led
- the phrase " ... giving Fisher control of both Houses and formed Australia's first majority government ..." is ungrammatical.
- I changed this to: "At the 1910 election, Labor gained seventeen additional seats to hold a total of forty-three of the seventy-five House of Representative seats, and all eighteen Senate seats up for election to hold a total of twenty-two out of thirty-six seats. This gave Labour control of both Houses and enabled Fisher to form Australia's first majority government, and the world's first Labour Party majority government". My reasons were:
(g) "... engineered a double dissolution election in an attempt to gain control of both Houses".
- I changed this to " ... recommended to the new Governor-General Sir Ronald Munro-Ferguson that both houses of the parliament be dissolved and elections called - this was Australia's first double dissolution election, and the only one until the 1951 election". My reasons were:
- “engineer a double dissolution” might be found in a source, but it’s an inappropriate expression. A double dissolution can only occur if the opposition twice blocks legislation in the Senate. Then the Prime Minister can ask the G-G for a double dissolution. But the G-G does not have to agree, and there are precedents for him not agreeing (see Chris Watson). So, for a PM to “engineer” a double dissolution, he has to have not only the opposition on side (a contradiction in terms), but also the surety that the G-G will accede to his request (and there is no such surety).
- The fact that it was no longer Lord Dudley but Munro-Ferguson in the vice-regal chair is worth mentioning.
- The fact that it was the historic first double dissolution (and the only one until 1951) is well worth mentioning.
- I changed this to " ... recommended to the new Governor-General Sir Ronald Munro-Ferguson that both houses of the parliament be dissolved and elections called - this was Australia's first double dissolution election, and the only one until the 1951 election". My reasons were:
(h) I removed the reference to Keith Murdoch being the father of Rupert Murdoch. Rupert wasn’t even born till 1931 and is completely irrelevant to this article. If anyone clicks on Keith Murdoch’s link, they’ll discover he was Rupert’s father. That’s what links are for.
(j) France did not "award" Fisher the Legion d’Honneur. They wanted to, and sounded him out, but he declined the honour. No award was ever made.
Over. -- JackofOz 02:07, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
- I've now made most of the above edits, plus a new one about the suburb of Fisher, ACT. -- JackofOz 10:03, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
'in either house'
[edit]Do the appendages ive added recently sound right? The clarification needs to be made that not only did they gain a majority in the lower, a first for any federal party, they also gained a majority in the upper for the first time. Timeshift 18:41, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
- There may be bicameral legislatures where a government can be formed in either house, although I can't say I've ever heard of one and I can't see how government would be decided if Party A controls one house but Party B controls the other. In Westminster parliaments, government is formed solely in the lower house, and how the competing parties fare in the upper house is irrelevant. Which is why, even if an Australian government is completely outnumbered in the Senate, there is still a "Leader of the Government in the Senate". This position could be described as "the leader in the Senate of the party that has formed government in the House of Representatives". It’s more unwieldy, but maybe it could be more accurately expressed as: Fisher's second Prime Ministership in 1910 saw Australia's first majority government, the world's first Labour Party majority government, and the first time any Labour Party in the world had gained control of both houses of a bicameral legislature. -- JackofOz 21:56, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
- What does a majority being formed for the first time in the Senate, my issue, have to do with forming government? You don't need to be condescending, i'm well aware of how our parliament works. Timeshift 02:14, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
- Q. What does a majority being formed for the first time in the Senate ... have to do with forming government?
- A. You might well ask, Timeshift, but you'd better ask yourself because that's where this originated.
- The expression "the world's first Labour Party majority government" is fine.
- And the expression "the world's first Labour Party majority in either house" is also fine. This expression wouldn't necessarily imply that Labour formed government, because for all the casual reader knows, it may have been the Senate, and only the Senate, that they controlled. But it's still an accurate statement in itself. This may be what you intended to have the article read, but I'm guessing here because that's not how you actually edited it.
- What your edit did result in was the expression "the world's first Labour Party majority government in either house". This suggests that whenever a party has control of either house, it wins government - which is wrong for the reasons I outlined above. I took the trouble to explain that, because I don't know you from a bar of soap and I have no knowledge of what your level of knowledge of these matters is. And you did ask for comments, after all. If you misinterpreted my generosity of spirit as condescension, I feel very sorry for you.
- I've reconsidered my suggested version above and I still think it's the most accurate formulation because it acknowledges that not all legislatures are bicameral, and the statement wouldn't have any relevance to those that are not. But it's still not the whole story, of course. Fisher's second Prime Ministership in 1910 saw:
- Australia's first majority government
- the world's first Labour Party majority government
- the first time the Labour Party had a majority in any house of any parliament in the world - which of itself would not necessarily mean it won government, but in this particular case it did win government because it was ...
- the first time the Labour Party had control of both houses of any bicameral parliament.
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Constituency in infobox
[edit]10 points to anyone who can guess the issue especially on this PM page? Timeshift (talk) 14:01, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
Labour? I don't think so, in Australia.. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.2.218.132 (talk) 00:21, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
Clarification
[edit]"the first time the Labour Party had controlled any house of a legislature; and the first time it controlled both houses of a bicameral legislature"
What does this mean exactly? A Labour Party or the ALP? Any house being state+federal or overseas? SA elected an ALP majority lower house on 2 April 1910, 11 days before the 1910 election. Timeshift (talk) 11:22, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
File:StateLibQld 1 100112.jpg - young Fisher in article
[edit]Does anyone know why the image has disappeared? Timeshift (talk) 10:20, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
Images
[edit]This article has too many images for the amount of text and messes up the layout. Would anyone care to invest a bit of time fixing it up, one way or another? Timeshift (talk) 13:01, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
Andrew Fisher a Georgist?
[edit]I'm a bit dubious about finding a claim that Fisher was Georgist in the first sentence of the lede, when it is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. Certainly it's not an alternative to the previous word "Australian". Did he declare himself to be a Georgist or is the citation provided stating that his views were compatible with Georgist or what? An quick online scan doesn't show the term Georgist being used for him during his lifetime but only recently. I think before putting Georgist in the lede, there needs to be some content elsewhere in the article that discusses the matter more fully in relation to policies he espoused or implemented. Kerry (talk) 23:52, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
Seamen's Compensation Act
[edit]I have deleted the following as inaccurate:
- Fisher's first government also saw the passage of the Seamen's Compensation Act, which provided payment of compensation for seamen engaged upon Australian registered ships wherever trading, and (in certain cases) upon British and foreign ships engaged in the coasting trade who were killed or injured in the course of their occupation."02 Mar 1910 - SEAMEN'S COMPENSATION ACT. THE MEASURE IN OPERAT..." nla.gov.au.
The bill was introduced into the Senate on 21 July 1909 by the 3rd Deakin government by the Commonwealth Liberal Party- see Edward Millen, Vice-President of the Executive Council (21 July 1909). "Seamen's Compensation Bill" (PDF). Parliamentary Debates (Hansard). Commonwealth of Australia: Senate. pp. 1405–1413. Find bruce (talk) 04:03, 8 May 2017 (UTC)
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GA concerns
[edit]I am concerned that this article does not meet the good article criteria because of uncited statements, with citation needed tags from 2020 and 2022. Is anyone willing to address this, or should this be sent to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 02:37, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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- Result: Delisted. charlotte 👸♥ 14:03, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
The article contains uncited statements, including blockquotes, with citation needed tags dated from 2020 and 2022. The article relies upon two sources as inline citations when there are several sources unused in the Bibliography. Z1720 (talk) 12:48, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Delist due to the uncited content but I'm not convinced that the unused sources issue is a problem for GA. The breadth of sourcing requirements standard for GA is quite a bit lower than the comparable FA standard. In this case, I think the two sources Z1720 are talking about are a book-length biography by a notable historian (Day) and then the Australian National Biography entry. Those sources are going to be fairly comprehensive about Fisher's life, so a WP:GACR #3a concern for breadth would require specific missing information and the sources covering it in order to be a real problem. Likewise, there hasn't been any claims either here or in the GA concerns posted on the talk page that any of the unused sources are so important as to be a series issue. I think there really needs to be more specific reasoning given when challenging GA status based on unused sources, rather than just the existence of unused sources. There's no requirement to be a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature for GA like there is at FA. Hog Farm Talk 00:36, 13 November 2024 (UTC)
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